Revenge of the Spider: Bit Bytes

Working on short stories and here is a little bit byte, even though these stories will be posted in a book together.  But they will be sold separately as well. 

This is a 2nd draft of the story, I felt it would be nice to let those a chance to read a snipit:

 Revenge of the Spider

The light shone through the window above the shower illuminating the small-shared bathroom.  The door on the left opened as Tavo walks in half asleep.  Tavo scratches the back of his head as he lets out a big yawn.  He looks over and notices the connecting bedroom door is open. 

Releasing another yawn, Tavo stretches his arms out giving it a slight push to close the door.  The door doesn’t close all the way.  Tavo walks over to the mauve colored toilet lifting up the toilet seat to urinate

“Damn” Tavo lets a sigh of relief.

 Tavo walks over to his bathroom door. As he puts his hand on the doorknob, the sound of rustling paper comes out of the adjacent room.

“Carlos?”

Yet Tavo hears no response from the room.  He shrugs his shoulders and opens the door walking out of the bathroom and into his bedroom. The adjacent door in the bathroom slowly opens. Long brownish-red spiny legs push the bathroom door wide open.

Another set of long brownish-red spiny feel the entrance to the bathroom.  The face of the spiders enters the bathroom. It’s entire body fits in the bathroom.  Accidentally closing the other door with its leg.  Trapped, the spider tries to get out of the bathroom. 

Tavo hears the banging on the bathroom door.  Rosa rolls over and pushes Tavo.  He slowly rolls over rubbing his eyes.  Rosa sits up moving the blankets around her. 

“Man, just knock.” Tavo laughs “don’t have to bust through the door.”

Tavo looks over at Rosa, who is playing on her phone.

Yes, I know I will be adding more to it, but for now...this is it.... for now. 

Irenia Guajardo
~Hellz Writer~